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Brittle with golden age.
Frail before a heart beats hatching.
Honed eye lids closed.
New with springs rush.
Toes before your heels.
Eye lashes flutter.
Lips the shade of peaches.
Succulent and ripe.
Wrapped within your skin.
Burrowed beneath your ribs.
Clutched gently by your diaphragm.
A heart dances in the rain.
I hope my anatomy is right...

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Nameless-please Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay...the diaphragm goes to the lungs....everything sound right!!! Wonderful!
Ah!! My dog started to lick my elbow....
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PINK-ROSE14 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Professional Photographer
okay. *few* thanks! :)

wow. -blush- thank youuu.

lol you're dog licked your elbow?
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Nameless-please Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob. And ya, he licked it. (he's so cute)
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PINK-ROSE14 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Professional Photographer
:)

hehe! That dose sound cute! My dog's HUGE now!!
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Nameless-please Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah...my dog is seven, and still acts like a puppy.
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PINK-ROSE14 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Professional Photographer
lol. He/she sounds like a wonderful dog. ^^
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Nameless-please Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He, 'Patch', is awesome...do you have a dog???
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PINK-ROSE14 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Professional Photographer
I'm sure he is! :)

Yes, my dog Sammy is adorable and wonderful and amazing. and a derp. lol
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